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Full title: The difference between loss and confusion.
Other title suggestions welcome. Been working on getting all of this out for about a week now. Point? I'm not the same person I was, and I have no idea who I am now. I don't even write the way I used to. My writing has modernized, it seems. Credit goes to =Nani-Midori. He gave me inspiration for the first line I'd been looking for. Drop an honest comment? I'm not even sure if this is poetry or prose. Um. Also. Critique on this. More than welcome. Comments
 I'd say it's prose. Inventive, flowing, poetic prose... but still prose. It's nice to blur the lines, which is what this piece does, more than just structurally.
It's very sad, and for some reason I feel that feeling that you get when you look outside through the window while it's raining hard. Wistful... lost... I can't describe it, I can only give you context for that feeling and hope you relate. The beauty that you feel at night in the cold during the winter... tinged with the cold and a hint of sadness... melancholy in the meadow... smiling at midnight. I can't. But I understand. Thank you. Your comments always make me feel a little better about what I write.
 I know exactly what you mean. With all of those things. And thank you for the fave, as well as the understanding comment. --  *dALinkSystem | #Writers-Workshop | #project-improve | #LITplease | *Lit-Twitter | =DeviantArtSecret  i think it's prose.. but it's still a nice prose... Lots of emotion going in this poem... and it's quite depressing...
^^ -- " Wake up every morning wishing one more time to face you but will you still love me in the morning ? " ~diodood Please visit my Gallery.. [link] Thank you dear. I appreciate the nice comment.
 -- *dALinkSystem | #Writers-Workshop | #project-improve | #LITplease | *Lit-Twitter | =DeviantArtSecret my pleasure..
 -- " Wake up every morning wishing one more time to face you but will you still love me in the morning ? " ~diodood Please visit my Gallery.. [link]  Idk. Nothing but love.
 -- Then I went down into the basement where my friend, the maniac, busies himself with his electronic graffiti. Finally his language touches me, because he talks to that part of us which insists on drawing profiles on prison walls. -West Rider Silver Bullet.  Aww. That was pretty.
I like it. *cuddles it*-- I love you. <3 The Game: You just lost it. Again. Love is good.
 -- *dALinkSystem | #Writers-Workshop | #project-improve | #LITplease | *Lit-Twitter | =DeviantArtSecret Thanks babe.
 -- *dALinkSystem | #Writers-Workshop | #project-improve | #LITplease | *Lit-Twitter | =DeviantArtSecret  beautiful. i use that word too ofen.
awesome. in the true sense of the word - it fills me with awe. i can see the story i can hear it i can feel it. you write with the gaps - i think i got more meaning from the things you didn't say. that shows the skill you have - to write so beautifully that there is a seamless transition from real to unsaid. thankyou for making my day. -- |
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